Writing

Yesterday we did a writing sample and I think I did pretty well with my BB Gun War story, 'BOOM Headshot n00b'. Pretty much its me hiding in a bush and shooting some dude in the face but I made it sound better than that. Check out the story ⥥ down there

BOOM Headshot, Noob!

“I’m in position, Move to point B, Over” I mutted through the walkie talkie as I eagerly tried to find a comfortable position in the thick rosemary bush.

“Ready to move on your mark George, Over” David whispered through the semi static radio, I got ready to go ahead with our genius plan to win this battle for once, so I said it, “MOVE!”

I saw him run out into the open, right into the line of fire, shooting the enemy with his very life (sort of) as the last surviving enemy of the heroic attack retreated like a coward...right into the point of my guns scope.

I slowly curved my cold, wet fingers onto the trigger of my gun. ‘Aim and Fire!’  BANG! The tiny bb bullet flew through the air like a gliding seagull and went right into my foes face! 

“Boom! Headshot Noob! This bb war is over!”